Monday, August 16, 2010

Shiro

soufflé of clouds

lazying around

i await for them to arrive

3 comments:

Maalini said...

Your haiku is very cute. :D

Kar-Men said...

Haha, I was actually referring to the time we are at the Jubli Park. I was much too jobless then. (come to think of it.. I was jobless when I wrote this haiku too =P)

Maalini said...

Ohhhhhh, now I get it! I was trying to make a metaphorical interpretation, which I did, though I forgot my conclusion almost immediately. :P But it's still a nice haiku, at any rate. I can't come up with one to save my life. @.@